So a few things.
First the good,
1 - First picture is SOLID, really good, you look confident and cool. Very HV
2 - You bio has good content
3 - I can see your style & image coming though, it's all consistent.
Now the bad,
1 - Your bio is written like a guy who needs a woman's validation, read the PWF free ebook, it'll help you out.
2 - Parachute pic is great, but it's too pose, if you have a few pic one that is more natural, it doesn't have to be in air, we know what you'll be doing & it add curiosity and good convo material to the girl.
3- In your 3rd pic are you feeding a pigeon?!, one yuck, two your posture is bad so cut it, you already have a animal pic, but redo the dog one, confident natural pose with a happy doggy.
4 - Your first pic & your last pic are both great, bit together it's easy to tell their the same shot. Pick on and toss the other.
Actions
- Read FWP Ebook
- Fix your bio
- Take a good dog pic
- Take a good face on pic, you we can see you lovely mug.
Good luck mate, good thing is you've got more to improve on so you can get some awesome results if you change it up