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So this is my new tinder profile and ive made some good photos. I'd be glad to receive tips on my profile and in what order to place the pictures. avilench .
Bio isn't bad, just needs to be edited more like:
-If you're really 5'11", then just round that to 6'0"
-"student" can be improved to sound more impressive. "Studying economics at University of Paris" or "Political science major" (you get the idea)
-Delete "if we ever date, you tell no one we met on the internet" this doesn't sound confident. Of course you're going to date/meet the girl you vibe with! Just leave the "Our story is, we met saving a puppy from a burning building." much more effective.
-You misspelled 'strengths' (I realize english isn't your first language)
-I would probably change girls with curly hair, that is very specific to a small amount of girls. Pick something more general that applies to most girls. Such as the following: Cute smiles, nice body, nice booty, nice eyes, etc. What ever you think fits.
What do you think about the bio now?
Much better in my opinion!
I would still get rid of “if we ever date” just start it from “our story...” comes off more confident and assuming you’ll already date the girl.
The one were you are leaning against a wall is a good pic IMO, a smile would be better tho. The rest are no good, one of them is very similar to the good one but inferior, the one with the clouds background looks super tacky and staged, the one of your face is "too much", the one reading a books seems too staged, and the one with the mirror is just meh.
Besides the grammar problems, which i imagine are just translation problems, you Bio seems fine to me.
you're wearing the same outfit in 4 of your pics. Girls will think you dont have any other clothes
I REALLY don't like the one with the cloud backdrop. It gives off major Harry Potter house of whateverthefuck vibes. Unless you're going for that, which is fine, but I don't think you are
None of these pictures are good, and your bio needs to be re written
Also whats wrong with the bio, i saw what alex wrote basically
Whats wrong with the pictures? A professional photographer took them, about the first one im sure its good because im not posing and im showing an action
1 You have no activity photos
2 you’re not smiling in any of them
3 all of them are too posed, even one you have a strange backdrop behind you
4 the first one you’re talking about is way too zoomed in on your face, it’s creepy
5 you’re wearing the same outfit in most of them, if you had them professionally taken you should have brought more than one outfit.
