Honestly man, this one's going to be dead in the water. There's nothing you can do to really prevent low investment responses ( except having good text game & a great profile). What I would recommend is deploying a callout. "Ah a woman of many words". Though, I would also say to not get your hopes too high.

You kept trying to get her to jump into the "trouble" frame but she wasn't compliant, I would have changed the topic much earlier

Why the all "you disagree ?" text?
It makes you sound unconfident in what you're texting and that you need her validation

basically your profile most likely isnt dom enough to say chit like that. thats why she laughed when you said that comment about the 'fuk me' eyes. she is laughing at the incongruence

either fix your pics so you like a real dom or dont be that upfront