My text was weak, how to improve this?

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I probably could have played it smoother, what now? I was thinking "I don't usually match with good innocent girls like you. You seem super sweet, but I tend to match with party girls with a wild side"

I think it would be better to have her invest more first, though

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Nah man. This is becoming too gamey. Say “Am I wrong”

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I was going to put "You'll find I'm right about a lot of things"

Is that too gamey? It's worth noting that this chick is a popular college cheerleader and gets a lot of attention, so I need her to invest in my frame for it to work.

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Yes that is too gamey man. “Good. So tell me something unique about yourself”

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