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I'm a french 23 year old guy living in Paris and I'm seing pretty good results with this profile but I would like to have some opinions on my profile and ways I can improve it. Don't hesitate to be harsh If you feel something's wrong with my profile. The photos are in the same order in my profile than in this post.
My bio is written in french but here is a translated version of it. It would be cool to have feedback on it as well.
Translated bio :
6tf Parisian guy from eastern europe and gifted with very specifics caracteristics :
-speaks almost 4 languages
-sociable and fun
-confident and a tad arrogant
-can whisper dirty stuff to your ear
-has a weakness for pretty faces.
I look even better in real life.
Swipe right, I'll handle the rest ;)
The only pics i dont like is the one with the guitar (because it looks very staged) and the shirtless pic, you are an attractive dude , you dont need a pic like that, i guarantee you that pic will not get you any more matches, in fact its more likely it would reduce them.
Now, with your bio, i honestly dont like it, maybe its just a cultural/translation issue, but i think you come off as a douchebag.
First, you already look of a good height, mentioning it as the first thing about you seems unnecesary, i would suggest you to just leave it at the end.
The douchey things are:
1.The "very specific caracteristics" , its just uncalibrated to me, adds nothing to the sentence
2. Confident and a tad arrogant.: Girls like a guy that is a tad arrogant, but they dont like when a guy SAYS he is arrogant, at all. And listing confident is contradictory, it would be better to write something that shows you are confident rather than stating you are confident.
3. The "almost speaks 4 languages" its just very "what the fuck does that even mean?", saying something like "Currently learning my 4th language" seems more genuine.
4. The "i look even better in real life" comes off as narcisitic to me, you have already showed confidence in other sentences, and you are clearly good looking, that's just an overkill.
Thx for your feed back. Btw what do you all think of the following pictures ?
They are not bad but its only cause again, you are good looking, putting that aside, these are bad photos because the first one is you in your house doing nothing and the second one looks very very staged
Remove photo 5 it doesn't have proper lighting on your face and in photo 4 your body language seems week
Rest are good
many of these do come off as very posed, like, 'I took them for a dating app profile'. its just a bit off putting.
do you have any IRL candids you can mix it up with ? like the one pic where you're out w your boy. you can use a few of the staged photos and mix it with those
I also hate your posture in the guitar photo. outside of that, I do like the general look and vibe / photos you're putting out there. just look a little more natural imo
Thx for your reply. Here are some other photos of me. What do you think of them ?
I do like these. esp the one w your mother (im assuming). blue thermal second
the curtains photo is prob my least favorite, not because I don't like the curtains style (I rock it often), but because your hair looks a bit flat. good stuff tho
they just look too posed to me