Ok a couple of things here, get her more invested before your number closes, you're typing almost double what she is and this is fine in the beginning because you need to move things along. Anyway some specifics:

• Sexualize more (comes with getting her more invested)

• The transition into the soft close (That's only if you like wine ofc.. etc) was not great, again get her to invest more but also you can see by her response that it wasn't optimal)

• Tell her to shoot you her number or ask her if she has Whatsapp first etc. if you want to talk there

• You don't have to qualify yourself really (I'm quite the cook), comes off as a little beta

• Shorter more concise responses with a playful vibe (Less emojis)

Good luck bro.