Honestly, I would get rid of that bio and start ov

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Hey guys. I would appreciate some comments on my bio. Inside parenthesis () i make some comments for context. It goes like this. Modest like no one else Maker of the second best mojitos ever Described by many friends as the perfect ("Name of a recurrent, very popular event in my city") waiting line partner. I sell ("Name of a very well known beauty catalog store that no young person,let alone male would work for") products too. I was just kidding, please stop asking me for face creams

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.Eric .

Honestly, I would get rid of that bio and start over
Idk that any woman on an app is saying “ I would
Like to find someone really modest”
If you mention making something, I wouldn’t say that you’re second best at it
Why in the world do you want to be described as a good waiting in line partner?
And the selling of beauty products? Definitely not a masculine trait
Scratch it all and start over

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Ivory Omen

Dude I appreciate you input but at the same time it seems odd to me how you seem to take everything in a literal sense. Listing real attributes comes off as braggy.

Just for instance, calling oneself the most modest guy in the world is literally the furthest thing from modesty, the contradiction is the joke.

I'm not someone who likes taking himself too seriously, that's why I have a conflict for instance describing myself as "dominant" or stuff like that, that's just not the kind of guy I am. Do I like making girls submissive? Of course.Do I like overtly stating I'm dominant? No

.Eric .

If you keep this bio up and don’t listen to people who have had results and success to back up it, you’re doing yourself an injustice
I’m not telling you to list in your bio you’re a
millionaire and drive a Lamborghini, thats bragging

Everything in your bio says “ I’ll be a really good friend for you” nothing else

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Looking for input on my bio